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I still believe
Contributed by
huwbeauty
on
Saturday, 8th January 2011 @ 02:27:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I miss you,
I wish you,
Could be here with me,
Your volition,
My condition,
You can set me free,
But by now,
Don't know how,
I've lost my brevity,
Can not grieve,
I still believe,
In my prophecy.
Can you gauge,
My terse rage,
I'd have to give it a ten,
Can you placate,
My tense state,
If so please tell me when,
My soul is grating,
I'm still waiting,
Hoping you will call,
I know I'm worthy,
I'm at your mercy,
My everything,
My precious thing,
My all.
Copyright ©
huwbeauty
... [
2011-01-08 02:27:48]
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Re: I still believe
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by Dirkj on
Saturday, 8th January 2011 @ 03:28:06 AM AEST
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| Nice Huw |
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Re: I still believe
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by emystar on
Saturday, 8th January 2011 @ 05:27:20 AM AEST
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Good writing.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: I still believe
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by cashfan1 on
Saturday, 8th January 2011 @ 06:53:32 AM AEST
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Hi Huw
Once again you have produced a superb piece of emotional, strong and free flowing poetry. Your work never disappoints. Thanks for posting. |
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Re: I still believe
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by iiloveyouxx19 on
Sunday, 9th January 2011 @ 04:57:02 PM AEST
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| strong emotion. the stops are very good at allowing the true emotion set in. Great write |
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