|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Anna
Contributed by
MichaelM93
on
Friday, 7th January 2011 @ 09:47:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
|
A thousand hours spent thinking
Only of you
Ever since the moment my eyes met you
Skipping the formalities
I knew I'd only see you
The beauty I see
William could not have imagined
My purpose remained undefined until that moment
We're all here to die
No matter how hard we try
Nothing matters
Nothing changes
Going on through life
Knowing what can't be
Losing my only dream
More and more every day
Blinding insanity drives me
Spending every night wondering
Why your eyes closed
Why they'll never open
Why all I have are memories
Why I can't ever feel you
Screaming “come back to me”
Only wishing for a quicker ending
Than what I'm facing now
The lights that burn my eyes
It'll be over soon
The fallen chair brings peace
The pain is fading
The lights are dimming
The warmth is leaving
Never to return
All while whispering..
“..I'm coming back, Anna”
Copyright ©
MichaelM93
... [
2011-01-07 21:47:56]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Anna
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Saturday, 8th January 2011 @ 04:08:33 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Welcome to YPDC.
Sounds to me like you just discovered a natural, raw talent on loan from God.
For this being your first attempt at writing poetry
is awesome.
Keep it up. I'm sure the journey of writing poetry will lead you into many, many places.
Congratulations.
big huggs, many welcomes,
emy |
|
|
Re: Anna
(User Rating: 1 )
by DjFreshmatic on
Saturday, 8th January 2011 @ 12:20:00 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| great poem, keep writing |
|
|
Re: Anna
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kevin on
Saturday, 8th January 2011 @ 07:38:09 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| The last line literally gave me chills. Excellent job |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
