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Uninspired (5 STARS)
Contributed by
Aspirant
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Friday, 7th January 2011 @ 09:00:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
poets
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I'm feeling uninspired today
And so I thought I'd write
In a bland and uninspired way
And just put black to white
Don't tell me that it's not profound
Or just not up to par
Just tell me of my great success
And hook me up 5 stars
Copyright ©
Aspirant
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2011-01-07 21:00:24] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Uninspired (5 STARS)
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Saturday, 8th January 2011 @ 08:38:15 AM AEST (User
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It's really nice writing aaaaaaaand definitely great.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Uninspired (5 STARS)
(User Rating: 1 ) by Zeberdee on
Thursday, 3rd February 2011 @ 12:32:32 PM AEST (User
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It made me smile, the simple hedonistic gratification seeking style is a bit shallow, but nonetheless it delivers its simple message. |
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