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Last Touch
Contributed by
JChimo
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Friday, 7th January 2011 @ 12:43:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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our last kiss
still lingers
our last stare
still gazing
our last whisper
still listening
our last touch
i miss you too much
everytime I hear your name
i wish it was all just the same
everytime I see a couple kiss
i blame myself for all of this
everytime I hear I love you
i stop and think of only you
Copyright ©
JChimo
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2011-01-07 12:43:06]
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Re: Last Touch
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by holderofthestone on
Friday, 7th January 2011 @ 01:03:38 PM AEST
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| Everything you are reliving doesnt have to be the last... Just keep pressing for that next time! Good write |
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Re: Last Touch
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by Breezy on
Friday, 7th January 2011 @ 04:29:33 PM AEST
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Ouch ... although the remembrance of something beautiful
can make us sad, it can also make us sigh with the hope that
it finds us again. And ...it usually does. ;)
There is a pain in this that truly captures my breath. And for a moment,
just a moment, I am lost in a world of my own, "love remembered."
Wonderful writing. :) Thank you for sharing.
~ Breezy
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Re: Last Touch
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by DjFreshmatic on
Saturday, 8th January 2011 @ 12:21:58 PM AEST
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| this poem kinda resembles me and how I feel, good write |
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Re: Last Touch
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by iiloveyouxx19 on
Sunday, 9th January 2011 @ 05:00:22 PM AEST
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| This poem is titled Last touch, but what is over looked by many when a break up occurs is there is always a slight chance..or maybe even a HUGE chance that things could fall back into place. Great write and best of luck |
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