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The Moonlight Danced Around Her Neck
Contributed by
Rx1471
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Friday, 7th January 2011 @ 06:03:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The moonlight danced around her neck,
The silver light and cream skin met,
And began to glow uncontrollably,
She became the only thing I see,
Two bright piercing eyes
You can look straight through,
Into her heart and soul at once
She became the only one I want
A smile that starts a magnetic pulse,
Her body curves and skin so soft,
Those radiant looks, though lack of pride,
She is all that’s on my mind.
Drawn into her embrace, her warming touch,
I feel the truth beating hard and fast
My heart knows first what my mind knew last,
Our bodies sync and it sets into place,
She is the one that I will love, till the end of my days.
Copyright ©
Rx1471
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2011-01-07 06:03:50]
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Re: The Moonlight Danced Around Her Neck
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by Dirkj on
Friday, 7th January 2011 @ 07:20:57 AM AEST
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| hmmm very romantic stuff , well done |
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Re: The Moonlight Danced Around Her Neck
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by JChimo on
Friday, 7th January 2011 @ 12:46:28 PM AEST
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| puts a good image in my mind. very nice |
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Re: The Moonlight Danced Around Her Neck
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by Breezy on
Friday, 7th January 2011 @ 04:45:45 PM AEST
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This is extremely beautiful. The best and most poetic lines
drive deeply into the centre of the soul. As this does. The last
stanza is my favourite. Dripping with passion and laced
with romance of the most acute kind. ^_^
~ Breezy
in sighs |
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Re: The Moonlight Danced Around Her Neck
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by emystar on
Saturday, 8th January 2011 @ 10:09:07 AM AEST
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Wow, this write is just downright, Awesome,
Magic.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: The Moonlight Danced Around Her Neck
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th January 2011 @ 12:30:13 AM AEST
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There's some damn good lines in this. I really like it.
Thanks,
Tim
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