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JUST LIKE ME
Contributed by
monashendy
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Thursday, 6th January 2011 @ 04:46:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I did everything.....
I felt like I'm a bird that wants to fly but it has only one wing.....
I tried to be a thing in your life....
I dreamed that I will be your wife....
The problem is that I can't treat you like my friend...
And if I go I can't imagine that it will be the end...
But thanks for every second I enjoyed with you...
Thanks for every word and pain you caused too...
And I want to know if you were in my place...
What would you do and how can you face this case ?!
Go I don't want you again...
Go I don't want one more pain...
You still have a good image in my mind...
Go before I search and can't find....
But always remember me...
Remember that my love tried to be...
Remember that no one will love and forgive you.....JUST LIKE ME
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monashendy
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2011-01-06 16:46:06]
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Re: JUST LIKE ME
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by JChimo on
Thursday, 6th January 2011 @ 05:36:14 PM AEST
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| great poem, but i feel like i might cry.....cause I can picture my love lost saying this to me. |
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Re: JUST LIKE ME
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by DjFreshmatic on
Saturday, 8th January 2011 @ 12:23:04 PM AEST
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| nice poem =) |
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Re: JUST LIKE ME
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by RyanS on
Thursday, 13th January 2011 @ 02:38:16 PM AEST
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| I know where youre coming from, Its hard but hang in there! nice work |
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Re: JUST LIKE ME
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by Shandra on
Monday, 28th March 2011 @ 03:34:24 PM AEST
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| I like this!!!! No one knows the issues of the heart like the brokenhearted. I can dig it!! ; ) |
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Re: JUST LIKE ME
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by DIOGENES on
Sunday, 10th April 2011 @ 07:42:52 AM AEST
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| WOW. If he doesn't feel guilty after this, then you're better off without him. Great use & organization of verbage. Very well done. Thank you. |
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