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raining tears
Contributed by
monkeylove
on
Thursday, 6th January 2011 @ 12:41:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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my tears are hitting the ground like rain
everyday
everytime
everything
remains the same
my life
my pain
my strength
is weaking
your ways
your face
your smile
i felt safe
i could breathe
i could sing
i could do anything
their pouring now
im screaming now
hes leaving now
why cant you stay
why today
why wont this rain leave my face
its wet
its red
its seen other things
walk away
then there dry
theres the sigh
then the cry
from the lies
nothing dies
but my eyes
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monkeylove
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2011-01-06 12:41:07]
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Re: raining tears
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by northernlights on
Friday, 7th January 2011 @ 04:49:16 AM AEST
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| strong expressive write can feel the pain throughout and the building anger and frustration very strong ending effective emphasising finality. |
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Re: raining tears
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by emystar on
Friday, 11th February 2011 @ 04:47:33 PM AEST
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Very powerful write.
Great work.
blessings,
emy |
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