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Waiting
Contributed by
Dirkj
on
Thursday, 6th January 2011 @ 05:15:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The Moon rolls over
Slowly
On her belly
Like she's dying
A Whale split the Ocean
Angrily
Because he never heard your footsteps
Yesterday
And somewhere
In the middle of the wilderness
Late at night
A Lion sits quietly
Listening to your tears falling
And me
I miss you everyday
We are all waiting
Till you come back again
Copyright ©
Dirkj
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2011-01-06 05:15:29]
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Re: Waiting
(User Rating: 1 )
by ming on
Thursday, 6th January 2011 @ 09:14:38 AM AEST
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This is so beautiful;
'The Moon rolls over
Slowly
On her belly
Like she's dying'
Thanks for sharing...
ming
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Re: Waiting
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by northernlights on
Friday, 7th January 2011 @ 04:55:25 AM AEST
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| Unique approach and it works......a lion sits quietly listening to your tears falling, I love the combination of sensitivity and strength throughout. |
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Re: Waiting
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by Daniellemarie on
Sunday, 30th January 2011 @ 08:52:37 PM AEST
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I like how you used animals in this poem because they feel just like humans nice job
-DanielleMarie- |
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