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REM bliss
Contributed by
ming
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Wednesday, 5th January 2011 @ 11:21:33 AM in AEST
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abstract
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tiptoeing over mine(d) life
dreams caper
distilling heart
feels startling
a pinch a sting
close to where
blown core
(un) been
wander
escaping
deflecting
shudders
wonder-land
of-sleep
simmers summons
moon hangs pale
leading up
threshold
awake.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2011-01-05 11:21:33]
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Re: REM bliss
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 5th January 2011 @ 01:40:33 PM AEST
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Very creative, interesting write.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: REM bliss
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by Voyager on
Wednesday, 5th January 2011 @ 09:06:57 PM AEST
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| All your poems read the same way....u need more imagination and perhaps a bigger vocab.....anyone can write a 3 word stanza...use ur mind, put some effort into it and maybe try to write an actual poem. |
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