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Days go by
Contributed by
xxmonstahxx
on
Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 04:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The days go by
full of longing
to be near you
the hours tick away
sad and lonely
anxious for your kiss
the minutes pass
empty and forgotten
craving of your smile
the seconds disappear
cold and bitter
wanting for your touch
Copyright ©
xxmonstahxx
... [
2003-04-22 16:05:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Days go by
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jilli_bean on
Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 05:46:20 PM AEST (User
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this poem was cute...i think you did a good job...showing the feelings of sorrow...and lonleyness(sry can't spell)...and the whole love thing ..was just a neat bonus |
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Re: Days go by
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 01:27:01 AM AEST (User
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well done.
michelle |
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