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Losing You
Contributed by
Jussy74
on
Sunday, 2nd January 2011 @ 03:22:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I've been to a place of total misery
A place where somehow I lost you and sadly you lost me
Like a drowning child I cried and tried to cling on
Taking anything I could to try and make me strong
Without your presence my grip became so weak
My fingers slipping as tears spilled on my cheek
The emptiness in my heart gaping like a chasm
As I felt our love was in a fateful goodbye spasm
The ebb and flow of life was stealing you away
Leaving me with a deserted heart to face another day
The future seemed bleak, all my hopes had been crushed
With the realisation that your love for me is a must
You're my essence and the reason I'm on this earth
To feel your love is to finally understand my worth
You appreciated all I am and all that I can be
And I know you truly loved every single ounce of me
Copyright ©
Jussy74
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2011-01-02 15:22:31]
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Re: Losing You
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Sunday, 2nd January 2011 @ 05:16:10 PM AEST
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Very emotive and easy to read. I hope your writing helps you in the way I am sure writing helps most people.
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Re: Losing You
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 4th January 2011 @ 05:55:14 PM AEST
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very heartfelt!! you can feel the pain in this. .I like when you feel what you are reading.. well done
*phantom Vampyress |
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