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Sequence
Contributed by
spike
on
Friday, 31st December 2010 @ 10:33:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
Event
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this is the future,
being born
and the past is in me
rich but worn
the present fleeting
like the morn:
here is the future
already born.
…now the present
…now the past
and now the future,
here at last.
this is the future,
being born
and the past is in me
rich but worn
the present fleeting
like the morn:
here is the future
already born.
…now the present
…now the past
and now the future,
here at last.
this is the future…
Copyright ©
spike
... [
2010-12-31 22:33:53] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Sequence
(User Rating: 1 ) by Voyager on
Friday, 31st December 2010 @ 10:39:26 PM AEST (User
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Interesting poem. Apt for this time. |
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Re: Sequence
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Friday, 31st December 2010 @ 11:24:21 PM AEST (User
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Back at cha.
Good write.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: Sequence
(User Rating: 1 ) by duff on
Saturday, 1st January 2011 @ 03:04:13 AM AEST (User
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Another creative piece of work full of imagination. This was a pleasure to read. A very nice piece of artistic demonstration that is original and interesting.
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Re: Sequence
(User Rating: 1 ) by Brianimal on
Saturday, 1st January 2011 @ 06:56:31 AM AEST (User
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Clever! I can hear a tick-tock to the rythm. A moment in time well spent and a pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Sequence
(User Rating: 1 ) by VR2776 on
Tuesday, 11th January 2011 @ 05:50:54 PM AEST (User
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This is very interesting love the flow |
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