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Man IN POWER
Contributed by
Akshayanildewalwar
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Friday, 31st December 2010 @ 03:28:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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The great man in power,
Is unknown to the word never.
When said something to be impossible,
He says it is always possible.
When he passes a way,
The cowards move away.
The ways he chooses,
Are the great personality faces.
He has the power to inspires all,
Which can prevent others fall.
He is the only man,
Everything who can.
Copyright ©
Akshayanildewalwar
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2010-12-31 03:28:57] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Man IN POWER
(User Rating: 1 ) by Aspirant on
Friday, 31st December 2010 @ 03:47:49 AM AEST (User
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To be honest, you need to improve your grammar and english skills if you want to write good poetry in this language. It looks kind of like you wrote it in another language and translated it after. |
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Re: Man IN POWER
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Friday, 31st December 2010 @ 05:52:53 PM AEST (User
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Welcome to YPDC.
great message here.
Keep writing.
Blessings,
emy |
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