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The Greed
Contributed by
Akshayanildewalwar
on
Friday, 31st December 2010 @ 03:23:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Two one way roads passing side by,
And between the roads I was standing.
Blowing a red balloon with mouth,
Then came a boy, crossing the road.
He stood on the divider, and then
Further filled the balloon with air.
Although it was filled enough,
He continued to fill the balloon.
When I asked him to stop, he didn’t
And still continued to fill it.
Then he began to cross the other road
continuing to fill the balloon.
It being filled excess,
all of a sudden then it burst.
The sudden burst shocked him,
And a car hit him.
The more he wanted,
The more he lost.
As the greed exceeds,
The loss exceeds…………….
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Akshayanildewalwar
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2010-12-31 03:23:13]
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Re: The Greed
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by emystar on
Friday, 31st December 2010 @ 05:55:39 PM AEST
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Another good message here.
it's kindda like the parables in the bible.
blessings,
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Re: The Greed
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by duff on
Saturday, 1st January 2011 @ 03:17:18 AM AEST
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Dramatic and driving the message with bold and storytelling imagination. Even if you slightly crack the door for greed eventually it will own the room and all its possessions. Very well done
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