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What I Can Offer
Contributed by
Jonathon_J_Young
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Friday, 31st December 2010 @ 02:18:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You know, I can wait forever,
If you really want me to.
And I can give you all my heart,
If you can give yours too.
I can give you all my strength,
If you stay by my side.
And I’ll protect you till the end,
If in me you confide.
I can help you when you’re down,
Just tell me what is wrong.
And I can, if you’re really sad,
Write you a poem or song.
I can give up all my ways,
If that would make you pleased.
Or I can beg you for your love,
And get down on my knees.
I can cry a thousand tears,
So you could swim to me.
And I can fight a thousand wars,
To find out what could be.
I can put this effort forth,
Until my mind could crack.
But I have one question girl,
Could you return it back?
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2010-12-31 02:18:15]
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Re: What I Can Offer
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by iodinelove on
Friday, 31st December 2010 @ 09:50:51 PM AEST
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When people ask that kind of question it makes me wonder if they really want the other person to answer them back ^_^
anyway, keep writing.
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Re: What I Can Offer
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by duff on
Saturday, 1st January 2011 @ 01:25:35 AM AEST
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This write has a soft flow to it and it just goes. A nice rhythm throughout the write but the ending is the best part for me. Asking the most important question. One of loyalty and devotion. A nice piece of poetry.
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