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Consensus of my Senses

Contributed by Jonathon_J_Young on Thursday, 30th December 2010 @ 11:20:53 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Every single sense in me does pertain to you.
So I’ll present my evidence to convince you that it’s true.
Do you think I have the wit or if I am sincere?
My words will have you ascertained and make this all so clear.

I hear your voice at any time and my heart skips a beat,
Like angels’ cries within the skies it’s something rare and sweet.
To hear your breath or hear your heart can put my mind at ease,
It’s like my own soft lullaby that brings me to my knees.

Whenever you are in my arms your essence is of gods,
And that lip gloss you always wear don’t even out the odds.
Your hair it always smelt so nice and always was so neat,
I’d play with it the way you liked within the summer’s heat.

To look at you just made me melt and left me in surrender,
A face so soft, eyes so deep and a smile that’s so tender.
Remember when I saw you stripped? It was my first time.
I couldn’t believe what I espied it truly was divine.

I remember many moons ago when our lips had first met,
The tender, warm and moist sensation I’ll never soon forget.
When we made love I was imbued and hooked to how it felt,
My eyes met yours and when you gasped my heart could only melt.

Then there’s taste, oh how so sweet, I always did enjoy,
I’d venture every part of you like an ignorant little boy.
My tongue so soft would touch your neck and venture down your chest,
Then further down I’d tease you so, but you always liked that best.

So can’t you tell it’s clear to see that I belong to you?
Make me yours and give me love is all you got to do.
I think my words should sway your mind and put you in a spell,
For love, you see, is witchery neither of heaven nor of hell.

Copyright Â© Jonathon_J_Young ... [ 2010-12-30 23:20:53]
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Re: Consensus of my Senses (User Rating: 1 )
by cashfan1 on Friday, 31st December 2010 @ 04:26:34 AM AEST
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This is poetry in it's most simple form, but how well you execute that simplicity. The flow and rhyme is smooth and your words breath taking at times. Very well done.

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