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Run Free
Contributed by
fadingaway
on
Thursday, 30th December 2010 @ 10:39:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Come on baby run away with me
Don't stop honey till we hit the sea
Come on lady come and dance with me
Help me set my demons free
Uncage the anger to the forces that be
Unleash this hill that's inside of me
Inside there's a force of nature
Screaming uncage me, Decide
I'll calm the beast while you hide
Inside so much anger, so much greed
Outside lust and love uncage and breed
Symptoms of psychosis run away reality
Come join me we dine on formality
Justice is served breath the fatality
Come on honey wanna dance and see
Don't stop baby till we hit the sea
Come on lady take a chance on me
Help me set my demons free
Uncaged is the anger to the forces at will
Unleashed is the hell it's climbing the hill
Make me believe that you care
Just ask me and I'll be there
Come on baby runaway with me
Don't stop honey till we hit the sea
Unleash the rage to the forces that be
Come on lady take a chance on me
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Re: Run Free
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by Voyager on
Thursday, 30th December 2010 @ 10:43:32 PM AEST
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I like how this line connects:
Come join me we dine on formality
Justice is served
The poem overall had a powerful continuity, it could be a song. |
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Re: Run Free
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by deusdeira on
Friday, 31st December 2010 @ 06:17:51 AM AEST
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| i can definitely see this becoming a song. I like the lyrics. |
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Re: Run Free
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by Ambivalence on
Friday, 31st December 2010 @ 03:02:37 PM AEST
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I second that with deusdeira. great job, I enjoyed this..
take care
-K.Z. |
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Re: Run Free
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by FLStatePoetryAmbassador on
Saturday, 1st January 2011 @ 10:13:20 AM AEST
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| You can make a song out of this. Love your poetic style and the tone of your poem is supernatural. Keep up the good work in your poetic endeavors. |
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