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Moshpit
Contributed by
fadingaway
on
Thursday, 30th December 2010 @ 10:18:53 PM in AEST
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Let me start a moshpit in you soul
Now listen close that's the goal
Break the silence suffer the violence
I've been running for so many years
From nothing other than my fears
Let me sway the beast to show
Rise up engage the masses
Start now this fire in my soul
Let me see the swirl rise and grow
Something ancient and forgotten
Now let me join the party below
Let me start a moshpit in your soul
When I was younger I wish I had the eye's I have now
Now I'm older. Now I understand my flaws
What would you do if you could take my place?
But when I see you, you compliment the grace
The whole if filled another chapter ended
Just close this book of memories
Start living, loving, the beginning.
I feel this fire in my soul
I want to scream and let go
So let me start a moshpit in you soul
I can feel the fire in my soul
I'm slowly screaming letting go!
Start loving living the end will slow!
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Re: Moshpit
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jussy74 on
Sunday, 2nd January 2011 @ 03:33:15 PM AEST
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| I absolutely love this piece, I dont know if its the title or the content, but it feels like it should be set to heavy music!! |
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Re: Moshpit
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Sunday, 2nd January 2011 @ 05:33:15 PM AEST
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On opening I began a read that became captivating, enjoyable, engrossing, then got lost towards the end the last 6-8 lines. just didn't do it like the start did.
Overall enjoyable read.
thanks for making it available to read. |
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