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In My Mirror
Contributed by
shyness
on
Thursday, 30th December 2010 @ 04:51:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Where is the girl who always has fun,
Who thought so long as you play you've already won,
Always smiling a smile thats true,
Now all I see in my mirror is you,
A girl who has forgotten how to have fun,
Who won't play because she's lost before she's begun,
Who has no faith in anything anymore,
And everything now feels like a chore,
Where is the girl who loved to laugh,
Would run in snow to make a path,
Who thought there was nothing she couldn't do,
Now all I see in my mirror is you,
A girl who feels so hollow deep inside,
Who couldn't laugh right now if she tried,
A girl who hates the reflection of her,
Because all she sees are the things that were.
Copyright ©
shyness
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2010-12-30 16:51:52]
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Re: In My Mirror
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by Aworldofemotions on
Thursday, 30th December 2010 @ 07:39:12 PM AEST
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Re: In My Mirror
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by huwbeauty on
Friday, 31st December 2010 @ 01:44:34 AM AEST
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| I really liked this.I think many of us find the mirror and who we've become bit daunting.And you got that point across really well.Good write. |
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Re: In My Mirror
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by Jussy74 on
Friday, 31st December 2010 @ 07:57:15 AM AEST
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| I absolutely adore this poem and so completely relate to it ... it really could have been written just for me!! Raw feelings and emotions pouring out of someone who feels lost x |
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Re: In My Mirror
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by JJAA_91 on
Tuesday, 4th January 2011 @ 04:28:38 AM AEST
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| absolutely beautiful, this i can also relate to. please keep writing. well done |
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