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Unforgotten
Contributed by
supertonguepunk
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Thursday, 30th December 2010 @ 03:33:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I brought you a flower
A sign of love and beauty
Of eternal friendship and caring
It's aroma fills the air like a gentle summer breeze
It's color brightens the darkest days
The days where all I can do is remember
Remember when dreams came true
When love and hope filled each moment
When we shared our thoughts and laughter
I brought you a flower
I leave it with you now
It's beauty will soon fade away
It's scent will dissipate
But my thoughts of you never will
Nor will the love we once shared
It's beauty is engraved deep in my memories
As is yours...forever
Copyright ©
supertonguepunk
... [
2010-12-30 15:33:57]
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Re: Unforgotten
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by Aworldofemotions on
Thursday, 30th December 2010 @ 07:41:27 PM AEST
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Re: Unforgotten
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by duff on
Friday, 31st December 2010 @ 12:54:00 AM AEST
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This is a really nice piece of poetry. There is a gentle and delicate touch inside your the lines and it's beautifully written. Well done
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Re: Unforgotten
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by huwbeauty on
Friday, 31st December 2010 @ 01:38:08 AM AEST
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| This is a nice tender piece of writing,not overly complex and moving. |
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