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Simple Pleasures
Contributed by
supertonguepunk
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Thursday, 30th December 2010 @ 03:31:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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With a quick, nervous glance I take you in
No words can describe the beauty
Lasting impressions never to be lost
Moments in time to be cherished eternally
Without these moments life loses some meaning
My lips slowly curl into a smile
A frozen, rugged complexion thawed at last
To know you felt the same would complete the moment
But not just yet
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supertonguepunk
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2010-12-30 15:31:35]
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Re: Simple Pleasures
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by Aworldofemotions on
Thursday, 30th December 2010 @ 08:00:51 PM AEST
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| NOT BAD I LIKE IT! I HOPE YOU CONTINUE |
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Re: Simple Pleasures
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by duff on
Saturday, 1st January 2011 @ 02:33:43 AM AEST
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First attempt or not this is very good writing. The descriptions and imagery are well placed. Its really passionate and sensual.
A frozen, rugged complexion thawed at last
That is an awesome line. Great job
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