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A Message For the Soon To Be Departed
Contributed by
Song_of_Sarah
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Thursday, 30th December 2010 @ 03:23:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Wrapp'd in sweet warmth I send you off to find yourself
Kiss'd on the forehead, I know you won't cry
I would be sad if you hadn't cursed our ground
I would be sad if I still craved your life
Check through your pockets to feel tickets smooth as ice
Go through your bag for your clean underwear
I sit and smile, awaiting my sweet alone
I sit and smile, a plain, hidden dare
You step aside, a lingering catch clear in your eyes
You turn to leave, still begging to stay
I wouldn't care to see your evident regret
I wouldn't care for I want you away
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Song_of_Sarah
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2010-12-30 15:23:33]
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Re: A Message For the Soon To Be Departed
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by Aworldofemotions on
Thursday, 30th December 2010 @ 08:04:53 PM AEST
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| I LOVE YOUR MESSAGE AND THE FORMAT YOU CHOSE A,B,C,B ...ETC |
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Re: A Message For the Soon To Be Departed
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by Spike on
Friday, 31st December 2010 @ 04:44:38 PM AEST
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the perfect poetic frame for dishonest partners to wilful adolescents. My favourite phrases 'my sweet alone'and that 'plain, hidden dare'will stay with me. Well captured.
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Re: A Message For the Soon To Be Departed
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by Brianimal on
Saturday, 1st January 2011 @ 07:52:36 AM AEST
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| The picture. The expressions of faces described to perfection. The emotion...or should I say almost lack-there-of is intense. Good one!!!! |
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