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His all consuming power.
Contributed by
huwbeauty
on
Thursday, 30th December 2010 @ 04:17:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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As the devils seed,
Takes hold of me,
And spawns another monster,
I storm about,
Scream and shout,
And try to vent my anger,
So dishes break,
Windows quake,
And all around just cower,
I rant and rave,
And cannot stave,
His all consuming power.
Yet in time,
I realign,
This feeling now so sour,
Don't know how,
Don't go there now,
Just sit around and glower,
I see then,
That demon,
I left to seed and flower,
Amongst the gloom,
In your room,
In your ivory tower.
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huwbeauty
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2010-12-30 04:17:32]
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Re: His all consuming power.
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by Voyager on
Thursday, 30th December 2010 @ 05:26:57 AM AEST
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| Don't know what to make of it but it was nice! :D......like the sort of pulsating rhythm it had....good job! |
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Re: His all consuming power.
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by emystar on
Thursday, 30th December 2010 @ 09:33:18 AM AEST
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Very interesting, thought provoking.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: His all consuming power.
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by ming on
Thursday, 30th December 2010 @ 01:02:54 PM AEST
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Most people who know me here, know I leave the rhyming alone. Each to their own. :) But...this one was catchy & I almost like it! LOL! (no haters please) This was the POP for me.
'That demon,
I left to seed and flower,
Amongst the gloom,
In your room,
In your ivory tower.'
ming
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Re: His all consuming power.
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by Rx1471 on
Friday, 7th January 2011 @ 05:53:24 AM AEST
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Strangely intriguing, something about this poem both captivated and slightly confused me.
Excellent work, though towards the end I lost track of the main idea. |
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Re: His all consuming power.
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by JJAA_91 on
Sunday, 16th January 2011 @ 03:13:30 PM AEST
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| the very obvious steady beat that goes with this poem makes it very catchy, and i like that. i feel it starts to digress a bit towards the end but i think i know what your trying to get at. it was a captivating read that was very thought provoking, well done x |
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