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A life so hollow
Contributed by
huwbeauty
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Thursday, 30th December 2010 @ 03:19:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Myself a wealth of nothingness,
You too see through the emptiness,
Ask why,
I try and give reasons,
Answers,
I don't see them.
So again a pit of sorrow,
For me to face tomorrow,
Return to where I left,
A life so hollow,
Destined to wallow,
Alone at home,bereft.
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huwbeauty
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2010-12-30 03:19:07]
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Re: A life so hollow
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by Voyager on
Thursday, 30th December 2010 @ 03:51:53 AM AEST
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| I liked this one, especially the beginning, which provides a very strong opening to the poem. "wealth of nothingness"....excellent phrase. |
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Re: A life so hollow
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by emystar on
Thursday, 30th December 2010 @ 09:22:40 AM AEST
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A bit sad but good writing.
blessings,
emy
Hang tuff, friend. |
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Re: A life so hollow
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by ming on
Thursday, 30th December 2010 @ 01:05:43 PM AEST
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Again, you captured me with this;
'Myself a wealth of nothingness,
You too see through the emptiness,
Ask why,
I try and give reasons,
Answers,
I don't see them.'
But not the ending. :)
ming
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