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Snow
Contributed by
iodinelove
on
Wednesday, 29th December 2010 @ 08:51:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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My throat
Burns
The world is a
Colorless infant
Cradled in arms unfit
For snow
The whine of transformers
Mute the sky in echoes
Of static blue
Hanging at the window
Empty lights
Laugh at darkness
And Unseen stars
Shine high
Whisper
Umbilical strings
Crawling across in blue
Fatigues
The world is the
Arms of a parent
Urging its child
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iodinelove
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2010-12-29 20:51:48]
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Re: Snow
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 29th December 2010 @ 09:00:19 PM AEST
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Great writing, abe.
A bit sad but job well done.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: Snow
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by Jonathon_J_Young on
Wednesday, 29th December 2010 @ 11:07:53 PM AEST
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| nice work! |
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Re: Snow
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by ming on
Thursday, 30th December 2010 @ 12:54:53 PM AEST
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Way to go Abe! Love this line;
'Empty lights
Laugh at darkness'
ming
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Re: Snow
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by ThornMEngla on
Thursday, 28th July 2011 @ 04:15:08 PM AEST
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This brought me back to a bad snow storm we had.
Good imagery!
The ending was not that clear for me, but at my age, not much is. ;)
Best wishes to you! |
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