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feels so wrong
Contributed by
xbabycyutie
on
Wednesday, 29th December 2010 @ 08:16:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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It was all a stupid game
Something that should've never happened
This isn't even a poem
More like a letter
But look at me, writing it on the computer
Why?
Because I dont have the guts to say it to you
I wish I never did it
I wish I told you
You're great
And any girl would fall for you
I wish I had the chance to know you as a friend
Instead I jumped into a relationship
If a relationship is what its even called
I want to say I'm sorry ~
For the pain...
Even if I felt it too
I'm sorry ~
Because I made you believe...
Even if a part of me believed it too
I hoped...
And I'll admit
When it was over
I got lonely
And it wasnt because I was alone now
Because you&I both know I wasnt
It was because I knew that you felt something for me
And I knew that it was something that was real to you
Apologizing for breaking your heart is something that I can't do
Because if i did....
I'm still willing to give you half of mine.
I'm sorry.
(iloveyou.COM)
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xbabycyutie
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2010-12-29 20:16:52]
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Re: feels so wrong
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by duff on
Wednesday, 29th December 2010 @ 11:55:01 PM AEST
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The tone throughout this piece is stern and direct with clear cut deliberate action. I like how you turned it into a letter as it worked very well. Strong write and well done.
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Re: feels so wrong
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by Desten on
Monday, 3rd January 2011 @ 05:12:06 AM AEST
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| This was a great read. I enjoyed the format of the letter, by the way. Hope to see more. |
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