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magic fades
Contributed by
ming
on
Wednesday, 29th December 2010 @ 01:36:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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piece of crystal
shatter my sleep
full of echos
sounding
like laughter
and ice might burn
and fire quench
old hands w/spiral
patterns in lines
twisted as mangrove
roots with a wind
from nowhere
there's a story that
snarls with wild eyes
and juju shrines
and candles
and the space
between
open
palms.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2010-12-29 13:36:59]
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Re: magic fades
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by Voyager on
Wednesday, 29th December 2010 @ 02:28:21 PM AEST
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| You stayed true to the theme of your poem which is abstract. The ending was very nice. |
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Re: magic fades
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th December 2010 @ 03:25:12 PM AEST
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| very beautiful |
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Re: magic fades
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by cashfan1 on
Saturday, 1st January 2011 @ 06:04:32 AM AEST
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| Nice writing. I like your style very much. Thanks for sharing. |
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