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blind plunge
Contributed by
ming
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Wednesday, 29th December 2010 @ 09:33:40 AM in AEST
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invisible ink
can not detect
untethered words
of love and its lack
spilled out blank
white/write as blue
hurt...left...lost
at the core
drifting
failed
numb
her dumb heart
Copyright ©
ming
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2010-12-29 09:33:40] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: blind plunge
(User Rating: 1 ) by Voyager on
Wednesday, 29th December 2010 @ 02:29:54 PM AEST (User
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I liked the style of this one. |
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Re: blind plunge
(User Rating: 1 ) by iodinelove on
Wednesday, 29th December 2010 @ 08:59:25 PM AEST (User
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very nice, and liked the quote as well.
keep writing.
always, abraham |
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