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Whisper of Death's Love
Contributed by
deusdeira
on
Wednesday, 29th December 2010 @ 05:09:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
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A collapsing nether, gradually turned to stone,
An anguished cry, slowly fills the bones,
Bitter, haunting tears, start to fill the frame,
Of broken years, while grief is burned by shame,
A degraded husk lies in the dirt, decomposing,
Holding bloody tears, and a heart that is frozen,
A black hooded figure, strolls into your cries,
Blinding the corruption that eats us alive,
You can hear it if you listen, cold whispers so thin,
Trust them to guide you, revolution begins.
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deusdeira
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2010-12-29 05:09:29]
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Re: Whisper of Death's Love
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by Voyager on
Wednesday, 29th December 2010 @ 05:11:39 AM AEST
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| First off, love the title! And the peom stayed true to the title through and through! Excellent! The feel it gave while reading was great...nice choice of words used in the right relation to each other |
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Re: Whisper of Death's Love
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by Jussy74 on
Wednesday, 29th December 2010 @ 05:18:41 AM AEST
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| Very strong and moving words, well written :) |
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Re: Whisper of Death's Love
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by Daylynn_Van_Wyk on
Thursday, 30th December 2010 @ 12:10:21 AM AEST
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| awesome poem! |
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Re: Whisper of Death's Love
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by Wilde on
Thursday, 30th December 2010 @ 09:55:56 AM AEST
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| what a wonderful piece of poetry such heart felt emotion when one reads this poem they can trully feel something |
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