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The Glory Of Stars.
Contributed by
cashfan1
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Wednesday, 29th December 2010 @ 03:10:46 AM in AEST
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Wearily the day limps over the horizon.
Looking up, beyond mountains,
I see that the moon has come again
To this old familiar hunting ground.
And there it goes, a ghost hawk chasing shadows,
Distributing planets to far flung places,
Liquid grey beyond the night.
Stripping away clouds, peeling away
Layer after layer of everyday lies,
Revealing harsh home truths.
Revealing at last, the glory of stars.
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cashfan1
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2010-12-29 03:10:46]
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Re: The Glory Of Stars.
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by huwbeauty on
Wednesday, 29th December 2010 @ 04:01:23 AM AEST
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| good stuff,I love the first line and 'a ghost hawk chasing shadows' brilliant. |
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Re: The Glory Of Stars.
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by deusdeira on
Wednesday, 29th December 2010 @ 04:02:03 AM AEST
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| I came here expecting a beautiful poem about the stars, and I didn't leave disappointed. Beautiful poem you have here. I especially like ... the whole thing. |
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Re: The Glory Of Stars.
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by northernlights on
Wednesday, 29th December 2010 @ 06:03:49 AM AEST
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When Dennis brings Nature to the fore then he also brings the sense of everything being in its rightful place for a reason and the reasons behind this not only give a setting for.....the glory of the stars but also strip away essential human Nature and reveal it in all its truthfulness, written with warmth of heart,a searching soul and a humility in the face of Nature.
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Re: The Glory Of Stars.
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by ming on
Wednesday, 29th December 2010 @ 09:15:41 AM AEST
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This is a beautiful poem. it made me long for the night sky...
ming |
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Re: The Glory Of Stars.
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by duff on
Wednesday, 29th December 2010 @ 02:23:00 PM AEST
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As always your writing is beautifully descriptive and well executed. Great job my friend.
duff |
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Re: The Glory Of Stars.
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by Voyager on
Wednesday, 29th December 2010 @ 02:32:28 PM AEST
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| You painted a very good picture there. |
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Re: The Glory Of Stars.
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by kleetas on
Thursday, 30th December 2010 @ 12:39:50 AM AEST
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| I like stars,moonlit walks,and glorious aliens among the ghosts... |
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Re: The Glory Of Stars.
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by emystar on
Saturday, 8th January 2011 @ 07:15:17 AM AEST
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Wow friend,
I missed the best one here.
luv it.
Bigsmiles,
emy
Beautiful |
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