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Dear Charmer:
Contributed by
ChaosFactor
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Wednesday, 29th December 2010 @ 01:49:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Look for yourself in rhyme, dear one;
Seek yourself in song.
For you will find soon it won't be long.
Read these verses with great care,
For once in my heart, they'll always be there.
Understand it's all a piece
Of this ridiculous puzzle: of me.
I make you no promises so I tell you no lies.
You've managed to see past my clever disguise.
But for now, dear one, you must understand
That you were never a part of my master plan,
And I am still bound by promises of old,
Even after my heart has been sold.
Copyright ©
ChaosFactor
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2010-12-29 01:49:29]
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Re: Dear Charmer:
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by hacktastic on
Wednesday, 29th December 2010 @ 01:56:53 AM AEST
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My interpretation: You feel you've been seen for who you are! The curtain has been drawn, and you now pull out the "Danger Zone" signs. You consider this fair, as if already apologizing and warning simultaneously.
Stand strong.
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Re: Dear Charmer:
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by deusdeira on
Wednesday, 29th December 2010 @ 04:11:34 AM AEST
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It sounds to me like you either can't get over a past love, or you have plans for your life that don't involve loving this person.
Don't make tons of plans,
they will just fall apart,
it is always much better,
to just follow your heart. |
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Re: Dear Charmer:
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by duff on
Wednesday, 29th December 2010 @ 08:15:03 PM AEST
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An intricate and emotional piece to where the emotions are confused and coasting along searching for the answers. Its very thought provoking and thats the part I really like. Well done.
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Re: Dear Charmer:
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by PosionIvy on
Thursday, 20th January 2011 @ 10:36:02 AM AEST
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very, very good work:)
-PI |
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