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Fried inside.
Contributed by
huwbeauty
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Tuesday, 28th December 2010 @ 03:37:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I think,
I sink,
Into a vortex,
I try and hide my feelings from it,
I blink,
I shrink,
Into my cortex,
I'm fried inside,have forgot what was it,
I'll cope with hope,
Not supplied yet,
I've cried,still alive,
My state composite.
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huwbeauty
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2010-12-28 03:37:24]
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Re: Fried inside.
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by Dirkj on
Tuesday, 28th December 2010 @ 07:15:08 AM AEST
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| Love it , well done Huw |
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Re: Fried inside.
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by cashfan1 on
Tuesday, 28th December 2010 @ 10:28:24 AM AEST
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| Well done. I must say your poetry is getting stronger. You never disappoint your readers and I can tell you put lot's of work into your writing and it certainly shows. Well done. |
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Re: Fried inside.
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by Voyager on
Tuesday, 28th December 2010 @ 07:54:42 PM AEST
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| Your poems always seem to have precision. You know the right words to use. |
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Re: Fried inside.
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by sicknivesevered on
Wednesday, 26th January 2011 @ 12:10:28 AM AEST
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| Sweet. I really like how you use "cortex". Cool title, too. |
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