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My heart enthused.
Contributed by
huwbeauty
on
Tuesday, 28th December 2010 @ 03:29:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I look you up,
I see your face,
My vision clouds,
My heart does race,
More perfect than I recall,
How could I not fall,
I try again,
My purpose renewed,
I must persist,
My heart enthused,
To give up now would be a crime,
I will not stop until you're mine.
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2010-12-28 03:29:54]
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Re: My heart enthused.
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by wordmusefindme on
Tuesday, 28th December 2010 @ 09:17:56 AM AEST
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persistence, excitement, infatuation
all three instill power and positive energy
but does that energy get to the other
sometimes i think our brain is so busy thinking
that we don't get the message out |
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Re: My heart enthused.
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by cashfan1 on
Tuesday, 28th December 2010 @ 10:30:53 AM AEST
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| Full of deep inner feelings brought into the light by your fine words. Keep them coming. Thanks for sharing. |
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