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Come back to me
Contributed by
monashendy
on
Monday, 27th December 2010 @ 04:23:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Will you believe me if I say...
Am waiting you to come back day after day...!?
My life stoped when you gone...
All my life became night you took with you the sun...
I miss your voice, miss your touch...
I miss you, I swear I miss you so much...
I can't forget your way...
I don't know what to say...
but it doesn't matter now...
I just want you to be with me..,please tell me how..!!??
I've lost my mind...
In you I became blind...
Please come back to me...
Without you I can't be...
If you are not in life...
I don't wanna stay alive...
If my heart can be seen...
You will feel and know what I mean...
Every beat call your name...
Every beat doesn't feel the same...
You will not imagine how is your love in my heart...
You will not believe me if I say you took from my body the most important part...
I adore the moments I shared with you...
I wont believe if it's not true...
Am sorry but this is my feelings I can't hide...
It's nothing compereable with what I feel inside...
You are my love...
You know when you gone you took with you my other half...
And now after all what I said...
You will return life back to my soul..Or you will leave me dead...!!??
Copyright ©
monashendy
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2010-12-27 16:23:58]
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Re: Come back to me
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by AngelFox on
Monday, 27th December 2010 @ 06:26:40 PM AEST
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| Strong feelings behind every line. Great poem. |
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Re: Come back to me
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by Dirkj on
Tuesday, 28th December 2010 @ 04:09:06 AM AEST
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| great poem, well done |
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Re: Come back to me
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by Anoo on
Monday, 10th January 2011 @ 07:04:33 AM AEST
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| I can almost feel the poet's tears. dramatic, honest and emotional. |
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Re: Come back to me
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by LandsleyAlexandre on
Monday, 17th January 2011 @ 09:59:12 AM AEST
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| Well expressed emotions :) |
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