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Irish Rain
Contributed by
mcnickname
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Monday, 27th December 2010 @ 10:26:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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This dirty unexpected weather
ruins my big usual winter.
After all my casual complaints
about the docile rain
And all my little excuses,
explaining why these days dont feel new,
I miss the rain.
This dirty unexpected weather starts to
fall off of the future.
All those theoretically unique snowflakes
gargle in annonymous heaps.
The bruised ice bleeds away.
The post man dances with confidence again.
Back to Irish rain.
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mcnickname
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2010-12-27 10:26:29]
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Re: Irish Rain
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by kleetas on
Monday, 27th December 2010 @ 10:53:18 AM AEST
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I like the irish postman,he always acts so tough
Thru the doldrums of the winter ,my sun can't shine enough!....i cry for you DUBLIN -ina.... |
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Re: Irish Rain
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by LandsleyAlexandre on
Monday, 27th December 2010 @ 12:23:23 PM AEST
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| I like it!! |
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Re: Irish Rain
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by Voyager on
Tuesday, 28th December 2010 @ 07:58:04 PM AEST
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very different....
I like the line "all those theoretically unique snowflakes" I think that sums up ur poetic style.....which is itself a unique snowflake. |
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