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Destroyer of Hope
Contributed by
deusdeira
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Monday, 27th December 2010 @ 03:26:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Here I come to tear you down,
Bloodstains on your golden crown,
I glide, I glitter… you stop and stare,
Unaware of my seductive deadly glare,
I grab your heart and spit it out,
So lost in me, you cannot shout,
No help will come, I control you now,
When I am done, to gold you’ll bow,
Come to me… oh feeble minds,
It is narcissism… I lie behind,
I reach inside, distracting with beauty,
You come to me, ignoring your duties,
Self indulgence is what you see,
I create from you… a mockery,
While I distract you with my crime,
You throw away your precious time.
Years have past, eyes set on gold,
But nothing can renew the old,
You’ve lost you see, this game I play,
It is peace, hope, and love I slay.
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deusdeira
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2010-12-27 03:26:14]
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Re: Destroyer of Hope
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by T-Bear on
Monday, 27th December 2010 @ 07:13:15 AM AEST
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| That is some heavy stuff. And I loved it! |
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Re: Destroyer of Hope
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by duff on
Monday, 27th December 2010 @ 04:01:42 PM AEST
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There is a depth to your words that is hauntingly true. Greed destroys all in its path sooner or later and you captured that in awesome form. Strong lines and profound imaginative writing.
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Re: Destroyer of Hope
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by Voyager on
Monday, 27th December 2010 @ 06:42:40 PM AEST
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Deep, dark and profound. I enjoyed it thoroughly espeically since its from greed's perspective. It reminded me of " sad but true" by metallica.
Here's my favourite line:
So lost in me, you cannot shout,
You really captured the essence of the dark subconscient cavern, the last fortress of ignorance. |
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