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My Fort of Pain
Contributed by
landsleyalexandre
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Sunday, 26th December 2010 @ 09:16:04 AM in AEST
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I have build up a fort, not with bricks or blocks
But with words strong enough that won't be knock down
Words that know the meaning of hatred, and relate to a heartache
Spread from the cold dungeon to the highest tower of my very citadel
Capable to bring shame to those who might try to penetrate the impenetrable
Which I have reinforced with the most foul emotions that anyone can feel
Around me, around my soul standing still a fort of pain.
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2010-12-26 09:16:04]
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Re: My Fort of Pain
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by RowenM on
Sunday, 26th December 2010 @ 08:30:15 PM AEST
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| Interesting. I love the first lines!! |
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Re: My Fort of Pain
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by arngrimur1 on
Monday, 27th December 2010 @ 07:06:58 PM AEST
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Wow...just wow. This is like words from my own mind while I was drinking and I had erected my own barrier between me and the rest of the world, but mine was like a one-way mirror: I was a spectator of life, not a participant.
Glad that horror is behind me :) |
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Re: My Fort of Pain
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by Dirkj on
Tuesday, 28th December 2010 @ 04:15:28 AM AEST
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| nice poem, well done |
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Re: My Fort of Pain
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by huwbeauty on
Tuesday, 18th January 2011 @ 01:48:45 PM AEST
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| Interesting write,4th+5th lines are excellent |
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