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A stupid blunder.
Contributed by
huwbeauty
on
Saturday, 25th December 2010 @ 07:45:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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You know my name,
I got your number,
I've found some strength,
Not going under,
My hearts in chains,
Made of wonder,
They Keep me safe,
Kind of armour,
My pen my shame,
A stupid blunder,
My soul exposed,
Feel my hunger,
You end the game,
Alone I wander,
My hopes and dreams,
Blown asunder.
Copyright ©
huwbeauty
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2010-12-25 19:45:32]
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Re: A stupid blunder.
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by emystar on
Saturday, 25th December 2010 @ 08:13:52 PM AEST
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Incredibly awesome.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: A stupid blunder.
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 25th December 2010 @ 10:11:32 PM AEST
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An Amazing write, extremely touching.
*Alice |
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Re: A stupid blunder.
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by cashfan1 on
Sunday, 26th December 2010 @ 02:34:14 PM AEST
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Mat
your poetry is getting stronger with each post. This is right up there with the best I have read on this site. Well done. |
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Re: A stupid blunder.
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by poeticjestix on
Thursday, 13th January 2011 @ 04:05:25 PM AEST
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| strong yet delicate. Like balancing a stretched metal tape measure. You manage it |
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