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ANGUISH
Contributed by
poppachops
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Friday, 24th December 2010 @ 11:24:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Standing outside the cemetary gates,
It all seems so surreal,Thinking of the twisted strands of fate,
Now, because of me,
She can't feel,
As it nears the end of the wake,
I walk to the casket and kneel,
Remembering all the parties at the lake,
And all the drugs we'd deal,
Never realizing what was at stake,
Just trying to keep it real,
Thoughts of her will always ache,
As I wear these bracelets made of steel.
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2010-12-24 23:24:49]
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Re: ANGUISH
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by emystar on
Saturday, 25th December 2010 @ 12:05:34 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
So sad and very deep.
blessings
emy
Even tho it's sad it's good writing. |
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Re: ANGUISH
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by sride686 on
Saturday, 25th December 2010 @ 07:10:25 PM AEST
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| Thats whatsup right there I can feel this one for real and we never know the cost until its gone thats for sure. good write and well felt. Steve |
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