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Realm Of Fire
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
on
Friday, 24th December 2010 @ 07:42:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Something sweet
dripped
into my mind
I had a vision
of your liquid lips,
as we kiss
I melt
and sensations flow
I love
to feel like this.
I'm hot
I'm on fire
for your love
I would do almost anything,
you got it
I want it
give it all to me
I wanna melt
kissing your Liquid lips.
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unknown_utopia
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2010-12-24 19:42:14]
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Re: Realm Of Fire
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 24th December 2010 @ 08:14:21 PM AEST
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strong write, short, but you can still feel the desire in it. nice job
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Re: Realm Of Fire
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by emystar on
Friday, 24th December 2010 @ 09:12:48 PM AEST
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There you go ,cheating on me again.
Merry Christmas,
emy
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Re: Realm Of Fire
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by cashfan1 on
Friday, 24th December 2010 @ 10:56:29 PM AEST
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Very strong poetry. Full of passion and perfectly
expressed. Another superb write. |
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Re: Realm Of Fire
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by Spike on
Wednesday, 29th December 2010 @ 07:13:22 PM AEST
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a great companion piece for your previous post. Passionate and immediate - ah, the sweet surrender.
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