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Lying here just thinking.
Contributed by
huwbeauty
on
Friday, 24th December 2010 @ 01:10:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Lying in a strange bed,
Can't recall what I'd said,
Been playing on my mind,
I worry all the time.
It takes you without warning,
Been fine just this morning,
Look closer you will find,
I'm nervous all the time.
I feel my senses glowing,
There's no way of knowing,
Been searching I can't find,
I'm hoping all the time.
Thoughts inside my head,
I recall what you said,
I leave the past behind,
I'm growing all the time.
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huwbeauty
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2010-12-24 13:10:29]
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Re: Lying here just thinking.
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by cashfan1 on
Friday, 24th December 2010 @ 11:11:50 PM AEST
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| This poem is tinged with regret but ultimately tells of hope for a better future. Well done my friend. |
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Re: Lying here just thinking.
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by LandsleyAlexandre on
Sunday, 26th December 2010 @ 09:19:10 AM AEST
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| nice poem |
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Re: Lying here just thinking.
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by mcnickname on
Monday, 27th December 2010 @ 10:33:30 AM AEST
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| For some reason this poem seems really fun to read... well done! |
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