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Now she's gone.
Contributed by
huwbeauty
on
Friday, 24th December 2010 @ 06:10:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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In time the pain will be gone,
But in time I'll still long,
I'll still ask what went wrong,
But for now my life divides,
I must deal with whats inside,
All the horrors I've tried to hide,
A rift rent of your explosion,
Sending out sparks of pure emotion,
Into the dark left by my implosion,
And as your brightness begins to clear,
I can see all that is near,
My hopes,my dreams,my fear.
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huwbeauty
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2010-12-24 06:10:19]
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Re: Now she's gone.
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by RowenM on
Friday, 24th December 2010 @ 11:47:03 AM AEST
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As with most of your poems, i don't expect any less.
I love the rhyming and the ending is beautifully subtle. |
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Re: Now she's gone.
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by AloneAgian on
Friday, 24th December 2010 @ 03:51:13 PM AEST
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| Thats really deep. If thats how you feel inside, Im sorry. Its very beautiful though. |
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Re: Now she's gone.
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by rhianwen on
Saturday, 25th December 2010 @ 02:38:59 PM AEST
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| Very intresting I liked this vey much |
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