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I sent you a whisper
Contributed by
T-Bear
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Friday, 24th December 2010 @ 04:07:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I sent you a whisper, on a cool breeze
I looked to the heavens, fell to my knees
Sent a prayer, up to the sky
Hoping the one I love, knows I’m the guy
Fingers crossed, even my toes
Waiting for the moment she finally knows
Then I can say, on bended knee
Sweetheart will you marry me
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T-Bear
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2010-12-24 04:07:19]
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Re: I sent you a whisper
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by Dirkj on
Friday, 24th December 2010 @ 04:46:56 AM AEST
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| i hope she knows, i have enjoyd the poem , well done |
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Re: I sent you a whisper
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by RowenM on
Friday, 24th December 2010 @ 11:47:56 AM AEST
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I was attracted the moment i read the title.
It's very clever.
And the whole poem is really sweet.
Congrats! |
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Re: I sent you a whisper
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by emystar on
Friday, 24th December 2010 @ 03:10:06 PM AEST
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Very touching, beautiful, tender write.
With writing like this you shouldn't have a problem getting whom ever your heart yearns for.
blessings,
emy |
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