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take a chance on me
Contributed by
fallen_angel
on
Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 06:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I can't promise
we were ment to be
but the love I feel
is way to real
each time I look into
your eyes I float from heaven
into skies
you bring me happiness
when it rains
you cheer me up
when I feel pain
when I look into
your eyes
sometimes I think
you feel it too
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2003-04-22 06:35:00]
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Re: take a chance on me
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 08:23:54 AM AEST
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good write..i can relate..but i am never quite sure
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Re: take a chance on me
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 01:03:33 PM AEST
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oh this is beautiful. Touching
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Re: take a chance on me
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 04:54:59 PM AEST
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ohh.. this is too cute. I hope he takes that chance!
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Re: take a chance on me
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 08:09:13 PM AEST
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A simple yet honest poem that I think most people dream and feel at times. Good poem hope to see more stuff from you soon.
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Re: take a chance on me
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by PhantomsLDY on
Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 12:51:57 AM AEST
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| Graet poem I love it! |
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