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Wish I Could
Contributed by
funnyface09
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Thursday, 23rd December 2010 @ 06:04:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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i wish i could
sing a song to our story
a simple melody
that touches the heart
of you and me
so that the coldness disappear
so that the emptiness are filled
i wish i could
sing the chords
of what your heart
wants to hear
but i know i failed
when my voice no longer
bring a smile to you
i wish i could
i wish we could
if only we could
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Re: Wish I Could
(User Rating: 1 ) by Spike on
Wednesday, 29th December 2010 @ 06:42:42 PM AEST (User
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Sincere and heartfelt. A few tweaks with language (singulars and plurals), and you join the lexicon of broken-hearted poets.
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