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Tears of a Rose
Contributed by
deusdeira
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Thursday, 23rd December 2010 @ 04:47:16 AM in AEST
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The stone inside this vessel cries,
For freedom from these lovers’ lies,
This rose is wilting by the day,
Endless pain, does drift my way,
Love… it speaks, it turns to black,
Deep inside your mind, it cracks,
I gave to you, a precious curse,
To let it lift, in love immersed,
Stepping on the rose you turn,
To watch it scream… and watch it burn,
Deep inside this curse of stone,
Love is gone, I am alone.
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deusdeira
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2010-12-23 04:47:16]
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Re: Tears of a Rose
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by Dirkj on
Thursday, 23rd December 2010 @ 05:27:52 AM AEST
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| I like it, good rhyming and easy to read , well written , congrats |
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Re: Tears of a Rose
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by huwbeauty on
Thursday, 23rd December 2010 @ 09:55:32 AM AEST
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| good stuff,fourth verse is awesome. |
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Re: Tears of a Rose
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by pat517 on
Monday, 17th January 2011 @ 12:26:08 PM AEST
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| very well written poem i like it a lot because i can relate |
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