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Battle Of Love
Contributed by
Anbarean
on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2010 @ 08:57:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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This heart was insane and innocent
Just knew one thing, how to love you
I adore you and I lost you, but not now
This heart is now ready to face the war
This heart is making me strong to face the world
Once again I am starting to have faith in you
Once again this heart has start beating its beat
I am here now waiting for you; I will not let you go
If you will come and go, then I will go with you
This time my heart is colored with your love
This color which will never wash or shade away,
This time your love strongly arouse me and my heart
That I can face the storm, I can face the war
I can face any conflict and I can face any combat
This time I will win this battle of love, no matter what
If your heart is fill with love for me then let it out
Don’t leave it in; don’t transmit into a huge storm
It will destroy you, it will tear me down
Just say it once, just open your heart and say,
You love me and that you can’t live without me
Just ask me once and I will give this heart of mine
If you will ask for this heart I will give you my soul
Copyright ©
Anbarean
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2010-12-22 20:57:45]
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Re: Battle Of Love
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by iodinelove on
Friday, 24th December 2010 @ 02:24:36 AM AEST
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I like it, but I am confused about the use of loosed.
do you mean loosed as in let go? It's hard to tell. Many people mix up loose with lose, which in this case would actually be lost...
anyway, keep writing.
always, abraham |
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Re: Battle Of Love
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by emystar on
Saturday, 25th December 2010 @ 08:31:02 PM AEST
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Fantastic write.
Very touching.
Blessings,
emy |
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