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Revolution of Passion
Contributed by
deusdeira
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Wednesday, 22nd December 2010 @ 04:49:32 AM in AEST
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Scared are those, who don’t follow their dreams,
Trading their lives, for a sad and silent scream,
Floating so lost in the world they created,
Feeling so numb, they'll admit that they hate it,
Passion dissolved; death has taken it's toll,
Like bloody heads, on the pavement, dreams roll,
A scar from the past, nimbly holding hope back,
When faced with their fears, their minds they do wrack,
For diversion, contortions, and corrupted distortion,
Fighting the pain, does not end the abortion,
Of hope that is gone, it is not worth the cost,
Release all your fear; leave the land of the lost.
Copyright ©
deusdeira
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2010-12-22 04:49:32]
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Re: Revolution of Passion
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by The_Unknown on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2010 @ 12:08:33 PM AEST
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Ooh. It's dark. And I love it. It's true, as well.
"Like bloody heads, on the pavement, dreams roll,"
that caught my attention for some reason. |
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Re: Revolution of Passion
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by Anbarean on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2010 @ 09:36:30 PM AEST
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wow very nice and I love your last 2 lines.
great one
Takecare
Anbarean |
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