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Trust
Contributed by
kizzayla
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Tuesday, 21st December 2010 @ 10:00:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I think about the pain i've felt,
the heart breaks that i;ve had,
i think about the lies i've heard,
and realized they're all the same,
You tell me that you're different,
you're nothing like the rest,
i trust you with my heart,
to never let it break again,
I give you my heart,
mind, body, and soul,
i'm yours for always and forever,
you're the one who has my love
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kizzayla
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2010-12-21 22:00:04]
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Re: Trust
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by xHeathenx on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2010 @ 01:07:40 AM AEST
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| Not just trust, bravery, courage. It takes those kinds of feelings to be able to trust them. good job. |
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Re: Trust
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by Ambivalence on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2010 @ 10:28:37 PM AEST
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Like you've mentioned, it is truly difficult to fully give yourself to someone else in that way, especially if you've been hurt before. you captured that here very well. i enjoyed your poem, wonderful job.
take care
-K.Z. |
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