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journal talisman
Contributed by
ming
on
Tuesday, 21st December 2010 @ 09:58:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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uniVERSE my head
mercury rides moonshod
ink smudged fingers
inflame my howl
a thirst that drowns
my rib-caged shriveled
heart by dawn noises
shift sprawled pages
measuring flinch and
the someday passing
solitude without cogent
phrase transcribed.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2010-12-21 21:58:56]
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Re: journal talisman
(User Rating: 1 )
by xHeathenx on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2010 @ 01:01:40 AM AEST
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| "A thirst that drowns". Love that. Gotta say Ming, your way of writing just somehow blows my mind. It's simultaneously making no sense to me, and feeling natural as if I'm subconsciously getting it. |
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Re: journal talisman
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by cashfan1 on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2010 @ 01:50:37 AM AEST
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| This is really a fantastic piece of writing. You are without doubt a very fine word smith. Keep them coming, well done. |
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